1 WRITING A DRAFT FOR DELIVERING A SPEECH ACTIVITY 1 Open again your material about Hortatory Exposition task 5 and task 6 especially about delivering speech page 3 and 4. If you forget where you put the material copy, just see the copy below. Task 5 Study the following speech carefully. The honorable Principal, My beloved teachers, And my dear friends Good Morning, First of all, I would like to thanks to the God for the precious chance. On this occasion, I would represent my point of view about “Student and Uniform” Within a few past weeks, there was an interesting topic discussed by many students in Indonesia that is government plans to abandon the use of school uniform. I think school uniform is a must. There are some reasons why the school uniform must be implemented at school. Firstly, school uniform is an identity. As in the army, we can differentiate between army, navy, air force and police squad just from the uniform they wear. School uniform is too. We can identify whether she/he is a kindergarten boy, an elementary school girls, a band of junior high school boys or a group of senior high school girls from their uniform. Secondly, school uniform gives us such a feeling of togetherness. The students who come from rich families are not too different from the students who come from the poor ones. The uniform will erase the gap between the rich and the poor. So, the learning atmosphere will not be disturbed by inferiority feeling from the have not students because they can’t wear an expensive outfit. In the end of speech I would like to emphasize that the government should cancel the plan due to the social condition of our nations which is in collapse. School uniform is still badly needed to unify the students at school Thank you very much for your attention. Task 6 Write the speech above into this text organization. Addresses Greeting Opening Thesis Argument 1 Argument 2 Recommendation Closing …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………… Now, let’s continue to activity 2 2 ACTIVITY 2 In the previous meetings, you have made 3 drafts of writing aobut Covid19. Now, we are going to make the 3rd draft as the material for delivering speech. Now, observe the example below. The 3rd draft: Draft 3. The whole paragraph will be written in a real text like the example below : The Implementation of Region Autonomy doesn’t bring any betterment for Indonesa Our government has run Regional autonomy since 2000. The implementation of autonomy for regions in Indonesia is based on Act no.22 and 25 year 1999. And it is done to make a better condition for our country and the people. In my opinion , the implementation of autonomy in regions does not lead Indonesia to a better condition. Why do I say so? Firstly, The reimplementation of region autonomy worsens the environmental degradation in regions. Regional autonomy challenges regions to fulfill the majority of their economic needs on their own. This challenge leads to the exploitation of natural resources to gain maximum economic benefit. This condition is worsened by the fact that most regions lack experience, capability and coordination among them. Thus the impact of environmental degradation in one region hurts other regions as well. For example, rapid development of Puncak area in Bogor worsens the flood in Jakarta. And let me show you another proof that Lack of coordination between Semarang and Demak that causes massive waste and sedimentation in Babon river. It clearly shows here that regional autonomy will worsen environmental destruction because the rush to gain short term economic benefit combined with lack of regions’ capability and coordination. Thus failing to bring Indonesia to a better condition. ACTIVITY 3 Now look at the next page to study how the draft above is written to make a speech draft. Next page 3 The draft for delivering a speech. Perhaps the speaker is a member of the House (anggota DPR) from Indonesia Future Party (IFP). He as the chairman of IFP is going to deliver a speech in front of the members of the House to show the IFP view about the implementation of regional autonomy. Now, observe his speech. The honorable the chairmen of the House, The honorable the members of the House, Ladies and Gentlemen, Good morning, I as the chairman of IFP would like to deliver our view about the implementation of regional autonomy in our country Indonesia. We – Indonesia Future Party or IFP- believe that regional autonomy is a failure. Ladies and gentlemen, Our government has run Regional autonomy since 2000. And it is done to make a better condition for our country and the people. But does it bring any betterment, ladies gentlemen? We believe that The implementation of autonomy in regions does not lead Indonesia to a better condition. Why do I say so, Ladies and Gentlemen? We have 3 arguments or 3 points of view. First, the implementation of autonomy in regions does not lead Indonesia to a better condition because it worsen the environmental degradation in regions. How come L n G , that The implementation of autonomy will worsen the environmental degradation in regions…? Regional autonomy challenges regions to fulfill the majority of their economic needs on their own. This challenge leads to the exploitation of natural resources to gain maximum economic benefit. This condition is worsened by the fact that most regions lack experience, capability and coordination among them. Thus the impact of environmental degradation in one region hurts other regions as well. Ladies and Gentlemen, now let me give you the evidence, the proof that The implementation of autonomy will worsen the environmental degradation in regions. First, Rapid development of Puncak area in Bogor worsens the flood in Jakarta. And let me show you another proof that Lack of coordination between Semarang and Demak that causes massive waste and sedimentation in Babon river. So, Ladies and Gentlemen, it clearly shows here that regional autonomy will worsen environmental destruction because the rush to gain short term economic benefit combined with lack of regions’ capability and coordination. Thus failing to bring Indonesia to a better condition. Now, let me tell you the second reason why the regional autonomy doesn’t bring Indonesia to the better condition. Well, It is because _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________. Ladies and Gentlemen, finally the third reason is _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ ______. Based on the reason above, Ladies and Gentlemen, we – the Future Indonesia Partywill give two recommendations. _________________________________________________________________________ 4 Ladies and Gentlemen, we – the Indonesia Future Party - have presented our view about the regional autonomy that doesn’t bring any better condition for Indonesia and we have also given the recommendation how to solve it. Hopefully our view and recommendation will be useful in making decision for our country. Thank you. God bless our country. ACTIVITY 4 So, no you have to change the draft that you have made in previous meeting into a speech draft. In the example above, the speaker is the chairman of a political party called Indonesia Future Party. In your task, you can be a major, a regent, a teacher, a head village, a chief or public helath body, or any one that suitable with the content of your speech. Write down in Word file and then send your work in googleclassroom. Happy Working…… Keep staying at home… Keep safe and healthy….
